update pop basics article to align with 24.04 features#1354
update pop basics article to align with 24.04 features#1354Socialhappiness wants to merge 8 commits intomasterfrom
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I cannot get the lint errors corrected. It's very odd. When I change it to for italics it reverts to the and I can't get my underline to stick. |
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Never mind, the linter wants it to be underscores... I'll do that instead. |
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The underscores seem to be working fine for the italics. |
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Here's what I changed in my revision pass:
- Made the YouTube embeds responsive (so they take up the full width available to them).
- Reworded some of the phrasing around the videos so they flow better with the rest of the content (I don't think the italics descriptions were structurally necessary).
- Reworded the second intro sentence to avoid repeating the word
desktopso many times in a row. - Changed the
Pop!_OS COSMIC Desktop Environmentheader to justCOSMIC Desktop Environmentto avoid confusion about COSMIC's name. - Un-capitalized
desktopindesktop environmentand capitalizedRustas a programming language name. - Added a hyperlink to the COSMIC webpage the first time COSMIC is mentioned.
- Reworded the Launcher's intro sentence.
- Added additional info about the Launcher's web search feature, and tweaked phrasing for the other features.
- Changed Dock wording to avoid confusion about applets vs. app icons (there was some incorrect information describing applets as "which applications are accessible with one click on the dock"; pinned apps are actually all part of a single applet).
- Moved mouse-based Workspaces info out of the shortcuts section into the main section above it, leaving only shortcuts info in the shortcuts section.
- Fixed inconsistencies in the capitalization of COSMIC and various COSMIC components.
- Reworded all generic "this" and "here" hyperlinks to describe what they're linking to for better accessibility and readability.
- Miscellaneous grammar fixes (commas, etc) and typo fixes (consiting, acces).
I'm approving now since it looks good to me after the revisions. Support can give it another look for their review.
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- Made the YouTube embeds responsive (so they take up the full width available to them). - Reworded some of the phrasing around the videos so they flow better with the rest of the content. - Reworded the second intro sentence to avoid repeating the word `desktop` so many times in a row. - Changed the `Pop!_OS COSMIC Desktop Environment` header to just `COSMIC Desktop Environment` to avoid confusion about COSMIC's name. - Un-capitalized `desktop` in `desktop environment` and capitalized `Rust` as a programming language name. - Added a hyperlink to the COSMIC webpage the first time COSMIC is mentioned. - Reworded the Launcher's intro sentence. - Added additional info about the Launcher's web search feature, and tweaked phrasing for the other features. - Changed Dock wording to avoid confusion about applets vs. app icons (there was some incorrect information describing applets as "which applications are accessible with one click on the dock"; pinned apps are actually all part of a single applet). - Moved mouse-based Workspaces info out of the shortcuts section into the main section above it, leaving only shortcuts info in the shortcuts section. - Fixed inconsistencies in the capitalization of COSMIC and various COSMIC components. - Reworded all generic "this" and "here" hyperlinks to describe what they're linking to for better accessibility and readability. - Miscellaneous grammar fixes (commas, etc) and typo fixes (consiting, acces).
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Lint passes & build succeeds again now.
Added basic elements of Pop!_OS 24.04 to include a few tips on using the basic features. Also added the current videos that highlight COSMIC features with new screenshots as well.